Tuesday, June 24, 2008
Saturday Rugby
My team is called Nelson Blues I can tell you the names of the team; Trah, Olly, David and Thomas, Joel and me.We won are first game by 5 it was a good game.
Monday, June 2, 2008
Computer Kids
We are learning to write an argument that will persuade the reader to agree with our point of view. We need to include:
· An introduction which states the problem and tells our opinion,
· Reasons for our opinion,
· An ending which restates our opinion.
The first one we have written is about what needs to happen so we get a fair turn using the computer at home.
Eight year olds have trouble getting to use the computer at home. In my opinion kids should have time limits because it’s not fair how long their brother or sister get on the computer. They should have charts that tell the daily timetable of what happens on the computer at what times. They should also have finger scanners which only let one person in the whole family. They would make sure that the first person who scanned their finger, it would only serve them and if that doesn’t work, the younger child should go first because the older kid goes to bed later.
· An introduction which states the problem and tells our opinion,
· Reasons for our opinion,
· An ending which restates our opinion.
The first one we have written is about what needs to happen so we get a fair turn using the computer at home.
Eight year olds have trouble getting to use the computer at home. In my opinion kids should have time limits because it’s not fair how long their brother or sister get on the computer. They should have charts that tell the daily timetable of what happens on the computer at what times. They should also have finger scanners which only let one person in the whole family. They would make sure that the first person who scanned their finger, it would only serve them and if that doesn’t work, the younger child should go first because the older kid goes to bed later.
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